In less than 100 words.. Here is a different perspective… #writing101
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I watch you from afar
You’re spiraling out of control
I no longer recognize who you are
I no longer see the person I used to know
You are drowning in your despair
And refuse to see the light
Not allowing those close to care
Simply giving up the fight
He wakes up this morning and stares at the ceiling. Wondering when things got so bad. He used to think he was on top of the world. Now he sits with the weight of the world on his shoulders. So he pulls out a lighter and begins to numb the pain…
-V.
Bam. Clear, concise, My feelings while reading were powerful.
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Thank you!!!
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😊 thank you
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great post with few words the message was conveyed very clearly 🙂
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Thank you!!
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